Hey Guys You May Know me as the big bad wolf from the 3 little pigs you may know the story but what you don’t know is that they were wanted criminals from all across the world so that's why I hunted them they robbed they told jack to rob the golden egg from jack and the beanstalk so that's why I was hunting them and they dressed up as a wolf in little red riding hood so that's why there wanted criminals so that's why I hunted them You see the big brother is the mastermind the youngest is the fast one and the middle big is the muscle of the operation’s where there not the brightness minds that why I could blow there houses away with ease but it was when I was facing the oldest it was the hardest to get them but when I found a loophole I took and went down the chimney but the oldest was smart about and he boiled me alive like the monster he is and for dinner, they had wolf suit and my fur became a pelt on their floor
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Rory, Cole here from Room 25.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story about the three little pigs, I think its cool how you put a twist on it. If you check out my blog you will see that i did a comic strip of the three little pigs. I think that maybe next time you could include some punctuation.
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Talofa Rory, It's Jiraiya from Room 24. I liked the style you have chosen. There is some grammatical errors like were is you sentences, there are no full stops. Also you said "I could blow there house" it's their house. And also there is some
ReplyDeletetypo's, but the rest of your story is fantastic. Would you like to try wolf soup?
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Kia Ora, Rory its me Sulaiman from Room 24 your story is really cool but I also got a little confused because the whole post is a sentence maybe you can work on putting some full stops and put capital on "Jacks" name. Overall the story is really good. Come checkout my blog Blog ya later
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